Evaluation Teacher Feedback

Below shows my feedback for my evaluation section of my blog. As you can see I was able to achieve my target grade, meaning I had no huge changes to make to my work.

Music Video Teacher Feedback 2

Below shows the teacher feedback for my music video. As you can see I only achieved a C on this piece of work, meaning I wasn't able to achieve my target grade. 

This meant that I had to go out and re-film a lot the sections of my music video to allow for myself to achieve a higher grade. Also, I had to ensure that the editing of my video was effective in matching the feel and mood of the song itself.

Evaluation Peer Feedback

Below shows the peer feedback for the evaluation section of my blog. As you can see I achieved a B+ on this part of my work. Although this is good it does still not meet my target grade of an A, meaning a bit more work has to be put in to ensure that  I achieve my target grade.

Planning Teacher Feedback

Below shows my teacher feedback for the planning section of my blog. As you can see, although I did achieve an A it was an A-, meaning I would have to put in a bit more work to ensure that I achieved a solid A.

Music Video Teacher Feedback

Below shows the teacher feedback for my music video. As you can see I only achieved an A on this piece of work. This means a lot of work would have to be put in to ensure that I was able to achieve my target grade of an A.

Ancillary Tasks Peer Feedback

Below shows my peer feedback for my ancillary tasks. Although I was able to achieve a B for this section of my work, it still didn't meet my target grade of an A. This means some more work and re-shooting of pictures would have to take place for me to be able to meet my target grade of an A.

Digipak/Advertisement peer feedback

Below is a short video showing some peer feedback regarding my digipak and advertisement.

 

Although we did receive some good feedback, most notably the fact that our genre of indie rock was easily recognisable (showing how we have met the conventions of our genre effectively).

However, there are also clear improvements that need to be taken into consideration in order for me to achieve the best results from these two products.
Firstly, some of the pictures used in the digipak need to be framed better. This is because some of the images can be seen as to squashed and out of proportions. This can make the whole feel of the digipak seem unprofessional.
Next, some of the lighting issues on our digipak images need to improved. Some of the panels are too dark, thus making it hard to see what the actual image is. Again this may give off the wrong impression, as it can lead to the whole product again seeming unprofessional.
Lastly, for our advertisement, a new image will need to be used. This is because having the exact same image used for the advertisement and the front cover of the digipak can become repetitive, which is something we want to avoid. Also, the new image will need to have good framing to be able to include all of the information that an indie rock advertisement needs (such as critic review, website and other general information).

Planning Peer Assessment

Below you can see the scanned in documents, showing a peer assessment done on the planning section of my blog. 

As you can see I have achieved one grade lower than my target grade, however, with the improvements that I have received it means that I can work towards my target grade and after the changes that are needed I can hopefully stay on track to achieve my target grade of an A.

Research Teacher Assessment

Below is an assessment sheet from one of my teachers. As you can see the mark, level and grade of this assessment matches the peer assessment, also carried out on the research section of my blog. Although I am on the way to meeting my target grade of an A, there are still some improvements that have to be added to my blog to ensure that it is the best it can possibly be and that it also allows me to securely achieve my target grade.

Research Peer Assessment

Below is a peer assessment from one of my classmates regarding the research portion of my blog. As you can see from the mark and grade from my peer, I am on track to achieving my target grade.
There are however some improvements that I do need to make to my blog to make sure that it is the best it possibly can be. The improvements can be seen by both images and as you can see improvements have also been noted on the back of the sheet, showing that there are a number of improvements that have to be made.